Re: [More-than-a-BSP] Announcement Review

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Autor: isydor
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Para: more-than-a-bsp
Assunto: Re: [More-than-a-BSP] Announcement Review
Hi,

intrigeri:
> Hi,
>
> isydor:
>> I'm replying only to a subset of questions.


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>>> If we want to make "Goals and principles" even shorter, we could:
>>>
>>>  * Drop "Dinner will be self-organized once we are there". It doesn't
>>>    provide substantially more actionable info than not saying anything
>>>    about dinner at all.

>
>> It provides an information that is otherwise not present I think: the
>> MtaBSP can last until or even after dinner.
>
> Well, actually, I doubt we can stay after dinner (we've not booked the
> place for evenings). So if this piece of text suggests we can, that's
> one more reason to drop it IMO :)


Ok :)

>>>  * Drop "In other words: if you're part of a group that is currently
>>>    under-represented in computer communities, we would like you to be
>>>    able to attend" (which is essentially a rephrasing of the previous
>>>    two sentences.)

>
>> I had difficulties to understand this sentence and could not find a way
>> to rephrase it properly. I find it useful too, so I would keep it.
>
> Just to be clear: you find it difficult to understand but would rather
> keep it anyway? (I have no strong opinion myself.)


Yes

Cheers,