Re: [Tails-dev] [review'n'merge][website] documentation on m…

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Autore: sajolida
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emmapeel:
> sajolida:
>>
>> Maybe I would:
>>
>> * Also mention improvements to the website (other than documentation.
>> Its structure, graphic design, other sections, etc.).
>
> I added a new line with links to news and security advisory
>
>> * Replace 'wiki' by 'website'. I understand from working with new
>> contributors that it's weird to call our website a wiki when it's not
>> really one (from a contributor's perspective). So I think we should
>> progressively stop using the term 'wiki'.
>
> Good point! Zoom too high...
>
>> * Always beware of 'it'. I think you last bullet point would have been
>> clearer for me you said "When releasing a new Tails, the branch the
>> release was built from (stable or testing)."
>
> /me runs to read the Microsoft documentation guidelines again...
>
>> * Rephrase "Translations added to the website" into "Translations of the
>> website" would save you a word :)
>
> Ok branch has been updated:
>
> tails@???:emmapeel/tails
> a74f8c8..6c1fbb5 feature/9528-document_master_branch
>
> https://labs.riseup.net/code/issues/9528


Merge (with some nitpicking on top), thanks!

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sajolida