Autore: sajolida Data: To: The Tails public development discussion list Oggetto: Re: [Tails-dev] [review'n'merge][website] documentation on master
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emmapeel: > intrigeri:
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>> Yay!
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>> Here are a few initial comments to keep the ball rolling:
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> Hello:
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> Thanks for the suggestions. The branch has been updated. Any other
> suggestions?
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> BitingBird, sajolida?
It looks good!
Maybe I would:
* Also mention improvements to the website (other than documentation.
Its structure, graphic design, other sections, etc.).
* Replace 'wiki' by 'website'. I understand from working with new
contributors that it's weird to call our website a wiki when it's not
really one (from a contributor's perspective). So I think we should
progressively stop using the term 'wiki'.
* Always beware of 'it'. I think you last bullet point would have been
clearer for me you said "When releasing a new Tails, the branch the
release was built from (stable or testing)."
* Rephrase "Translations added to the website" into "Translations of the
website" would save you a word :)
