duc01k--- via Tails-dev:
> Opened a bug: https://gitlab.tails.boum.org/tails/tails/-/issues/18232
Thanks for the clear feedback duc01k! I wrote this doc and reading your 
detailed comments about how you understand each line really helps me 
understand better your concern.
To be honest, I'm not sure that we can do a lot to make this doc less 
scary but there are definitely some bits of it that can be improved to 
be clearer.
I don't think that working on this should be a big priority for our 
technical writing team but at least it's good to have all this feedback 
well tracked for when we'll work on it.
See you on #18232 :)
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