[Tails-ux] Review user-visible strings of tails-additionnal-…

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Autore: Alan
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To: Tails user experience & user interface design
Oggetto: [Tails-ux] Review user-visible strings of tails-additionnal-software
Hi,

During review of improvements of Additional Software Packages
(https://tails.boum.org/doc/advanced_topics/additional_software/), I've
been proposed string imporvements. Before applying them, we'd like to
have your advice :

1)

current:

Your additional software installation failed

The installation failed. Please check your additional software
configuration, or read the system log to understand better the problem.

proposal:

The additional software installation failed

The additional software installation failed. Please check the
additional software configuration and the system log (journalctl) for
errors.

2)

current:

Your additional software are installed

Your additional software are ready to use.

proposal:

Additional software installed successfully

The additional software was installed successfully and is ready to use.

3)

current:

Your additional software upgrade failed

The check for upgrades failed. This might be due to a network problem.
Please check your network connection, try to restart Tails, or read the
system log to understand better the problem.

proposal:

Failed to update the additional software

Updating the additional software failed. Please check your network
connection, check the system log (journalctl) for errors, or try
restarting Tails.

4)

current:

Your additional software are up to date

The upgrade was successful.

proposal:

Additional software successfully updated

The additional software was successfully updated.


Thanks by advance!