Re: [Tails-project] Request for comments: Tails social contr…

Hi!

sajolida:
> spriver:

> Woh! So cool that you're working on this!
>
> Here are some comments, on top of a5ee62c86d.
>
> - In "By developing Tails and publishing related documentation": "and
> publishing related documentation" sounds like an addendum and I wonder
> if 1. "documentation" is the only "non-developing" work that we do., 2.
> we could find a more generic phrasing to make the whole sentence
> shorter. Maybe "By working on Tails"? or "By creating Tails". And, as a
> doc writer, I already feel myself included in "By developing Tails".

I agree, and used "By creating Tails".

> - "advance these concepts.": intrigeri didn't like "rights" but now I
> feel like "concepts" is too neutral. What about "ideals"? or "principles"?

Great idea. Using "ideals".

> - "the tools we write and deploy," → "the tools we create" could be
> shorter and less code-centric, no?

Ack.

> - "2. Tails and the related documentation". same, I'm not sure doc is
> worth the periphrasis.

Ack.

> - "do our best to write secure code", this time I feel like this is a
> bit too code-centric. Usability issues can also lead to insecure tools.
> And I'm not sure to understand what "and make the right decisions."
> refers to (on top of "do our best to"). So maybe this could be changed
> to "We will always do our best to create secure and usable tools."?

very good.

> - How does this document relate to the Code of Conduct? Should there be
> cross-references between the two? Maybe in "4. We encourage
> participation and transparency"? I don't mind proposing a wording if you
> think it's a good idea.

I think it's a good idea. If you want to propose a sentence for that,
please do.

> Most of this is nitpicking, so feel free to take whatever you want and
> silently ignore the rest :)

I like all your proposed changes as they make the document more concise.
I added them in commit 7a283f0.

Cheers!
u.