hi,
Mathieu Goessens:
> intrigeri:
>> Mathieu Goessens:
> * Invert the second (CoC) and the third bullets ("We want to bring
> together a heterogeneous group of people"). As the third bullet clearly
> define and introduce the intention. All other points, including CoC, are
> based on this one and it does a nice introduction.
No strong opinion ⇒ applied (even though I didn't manage to guess how
it improves things).
> * Group bullets and have *text, and pagraphs* instead of bullet points.
> I really beleive that text will be more welcoming than bullet points,
> especially for audience that are not cartesian computer scientists. :)
No strong opinion ⇒ done.
> * I think that it may be interesting to add a few words to describe a
> bit more the intention and to have a more natural flow for reading.
> I try to address those points but I prefered to not edit the wiki
> without global aggreement (and a better english level :)).
> You can see them in https://pad.riseup.net/p/00e24qTnQksu.
Sorry, I'm too lazy to manually diff pieces of text, especially
written in two different markup languages (note that editing the wiki
page would give us a diff output for free, for those who like that).
But I'm more than happy if someone else is less lazy / painful and
acts accordingly (e.g. apply the changes or discuss them).
>> If we want to make "Goals and principles" even shorter, we could:
>>
>> * Drop "Dinner will be self-organized once we are there". It doesn't
>> provide substantially more actionable info than not saying anything
>> about dinner at all.
> I tend to agree that this part can be removed. (I did not in my draft)
Done.
>> * Drop "In other words: if you're part of a group that is currently
>> under-represented in computer communities, we would like you to be
>> able to attend" (which is essentially a rephrasing of the previous
>> two sentences.)
> This one however, i think we can keep this part, to be as explicit as
> possible about this point, especially if we choose to invert bullets 3
> and 2 (see my draft).
OK!
Cheers,
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intrigeri
