Hi,
intrigeri:
> Hi,
>
> isydor:
>> I'm replying only to a subset of questions.
[...]
>>> If we want to make "Goals and principles" even shorter, we could:
>>>
>>> * Drop "Dinner will be self-organized once we are there". It doesn't
>>> provide substantially more actionable info than not saying anything
>>> about dinner at all.
>
>> It provides an information that is otherwise not present I think: the
>> MtaBSP can last until or even after dinner.
>
> Well, actually, I doubt we can stay after dinner (we've not booked the
> place for evenings). So if this piece of text suggests we can, that's
> one more reason to drop it IMO :)
Ok :)
>>> * Drop "In other words: if you're part of a group that is currently
>>> under-represented in computer communities, we would like you to be
>>> able to attend" (which is essentially a rephrasing of the previous
>>> two sentences.)
>
>> I had difficulties to understand this sentence and could not find a way
>> to rephrase it properly. I find it useful too, so I would keep it.
>
> Just to be clear: you find it difficult to understand but would rather
> keep it anyway? (I have no strong opinion myself.)
Yes
Cheers,
