Hi,
isydor:
> I'm replying only to a subset of questions.
Thanks!
> intrigeri:
> The announcement is great :)
:)
>> If we want to make "Goals and principles" even shorter, we could:
>>
>> * Drop "Dinner will be self-organized once we are there". It doesn't
>> provide substantially more actionable info than not saying anything
>> about dinner at all.
> It provides an information that is otherwise not present I think: the
> MtaBSP can last until or even after dinner.
Well, actually, I doubt we can stay after dinner (we've not booked the
place for evenings). So if this piece of text suggests we can, that's
one more reason to drop it IMO :)
>> * Drop "In other words: if you're part of a group that is currently
>> under-represented in computer communities, we would like you to be
>> able to attend" (which is essentially a rephrasing of the previous
>> two sentences.)
> I had difficulties to understand this sentence and could not find a way
> to rephrase it properly. I find it useful too, so I would keep it.
Just to be clear: you find it difficult to understand but would rather
keep it anyway? (I have no strong opinion myself.)
Cheers,
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intrigeri
