Hi,
[cc'ing again because of pulling]
Please pull from flapflap's branch. I could not find any better term for
"Dear Tails user". I talked to several persons and to them your proposed
change was sounding natural. So I did not change it (:
Cheers!
spriver
flapflap:
> Hi,
>
> apparently I missed some review requests and maybe also other emails
> (don't know how many, but looks like several days). Since I don't have
> the original email to reply to, this breaks threading now. Sorry :(
>
> Since the emails seem to be delayed by the list, I'm also CC'ing spriver
> directly.
>
> https://mailman.boum.org/pipermail/tails-l10n/2016-October/004192.html
>
> spriver:
>> Hi,
>> regarding the donation campaign I translated the new homepage of the Tor
>> Browser in Tails.
>> Please review:
>>
>> https://gitlab.com/spriver/tails.git
>> branch: de_home
>> HEAD commit: 0e914e1 Initial translation
>>
>> Affected files:
>> wiki/src/home.de.po
>>
>> Cheers!
>> spriver
>
> Again a review of again spriver's work. I changed some sentences/words
> and the title ("Lieber Benutzer von Tails" -> "Liebe Tails-Nutzerin,
> lieber Tails-Nutzer"), which is much longer but sounds nicer to me.
> Generally (i.e., indefinitive article), I also prefer use of "Benutzer"
> instead of other (more artificial and seldom used) constructs like
> "Benutzender", in this case however, a definite article is used and a
> person is directly addressed.
> The construct proposed here sounds more common to me, such as "Liebe
> Bürgerinnen und Bürger" ("Dear citizens"). Other shorter forms are also
> not so nice (IMO) as title/opening, such as "Liebe/r Tails-Nutzer/in".
>
> If you have a flash of genius ("Geistesblitz"), please share :)
>
> Please review:
> https://gitlab.com/flapflap/tails.git
> branch: de_home
> HEAD commit: 55360d20 - minor rephrasing
>
> Cheers,
> ~flapflap
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