hi
On 11/09/2015 12:24 PM, spriver wrote:
> Hi,
> how should we proceed here (and in the future)? Flapflap's branch
> contains the simplified sentences, Muri's doesn't. IMHO I like the
> sentences split up into two more.
yes, me too
> Maybe we could also patch the
> original into two sentences at this place?
https://gitlab.com/muri/tails.git
[muri/doc-fix-long-sentence_chpp 127bab4] fixed long sentence for easier
readability
> Any opinions?
i don't know about the second sentence. if it is a problem (which i
don't think) i think it should be fixed in the original, not in the
translation.
my approach is this: i make the german version easier. then i try to
translate back to english. if the english version is now easier to read,
than its a bug in the original and it should be fixed there.
so:
> In the right pane, select the persistent volume partition, labelled
> Encrypted by clicking on it.
becomes:
> Klicken Sie im rechten Fensterbereich auf die Partition des
> beständigen Speicherbereichs mit dem Namen Verschlüsselt
becomes:
> In the right pane click on the persistent volume partition labelled
> Encrypted
(but maybe my simplified english is not good correct?)
cheers,
muri
>
> Cheers!
> spriver
>
> Muri Nicanor:
>> hi,
>
>> i've cherrypicked the commit, please review:
>> https://gitlab.com/muri/tails.git
>> [muri-t10n/review-de_persistence_passphrase bd3f978f] cherrypicked
>> review with typo fixes and simpler sentences
>
>> cheers, muri
>
>> On 11/01/2015 06:18 PM, Muri Nicanor wrote:
>>> hi,
>>>
>>> On 11/01/2015 05:48 PM, flapflap wrote:
>>>> - some sentences simplified/long sentences split into two.
>>>
>>> i think it would be best to stay as close to the english original
>>> as possible. especially when the english original changes after
>>> the translation. you can also simplify the english original by
>>> proposing patches.
>>>
>>> cheers, muri
>>>
>
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