spencerone@??? wrote: > > Alan:
> > Looks nearly perfect to me. A few comments through:
> >
> > - I'd prefer the "Here you can check and modify..." text to be
> > justified to align with the comments below
> > - once added, I though the privacy settings could be edited with a
> > popover, as the language settings are. I'm thus not sure of the usage
> > of the "-" button. What do you think?
> >
>
> Yeah. Pop over is great. I figured the flow would go something like
> this: People would click the '+' and select a setting from a pop over.
> Then people would activate the setting by selecting its list item and
> selecting an option from a pop over. The '-' button is consistent with
> GNOME 3 as a way to remove the individual settings.
> OK
> > - I'm not sure that the "i" in a circle is clear enough as a help
> > button.
>
> I agree. Help isn't needed in the welcome text since it would link to a
> more involved account of the task, yeah? Also, since the sections do
> need documentation links, we could use circled question marks(?), since
> info is the outcome of an inquiry. Full text could crowd other
> elements.
>
> However, we could use a link to the introduction for those gifted a
> Tails device. The welcome text seems like a reasonable location.
> 'Learn More' seems appropriate as text, though it isn't included due to
> temporary uncertainty.
>
> Attached[0] is the document with the respective updates.
> Looks good to me.
> >> The only question I have here is should we de-emphasize the 'Start
> >> Tails' button in the Guided Configuration flow (as shown in the
> >> attached
> >> image)?
> >>
> >
> > Alan:
> > Perhaps we should make this button inactive or perhaps even not show
> > it before the end of the Guided Configuration.
> >
>
> Inactive makes the most sense.
> OK.
