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Hi,

emmapeel wrote (04 Jun 2015 08:51:07 GMT) :
> I have added a little documentation about the purpose of the master
> branch (#9528)


Yay!

Here are a few initial comments to keep the ball rolling:

* "It receives" isn't very clear to me. Below you're listing things we
are merging into master.
* s/affects/affect/ (grammar fix)
* Typography (trailing period, etc.) is not consistent accross the
bullet list that's added.
* "New translations" is overly precise: other kinds of translation
improvements also make their way into master.

Cheers!