sajolida:
> Muri Nicanor:
>> On 05/16/2015 08:20 PM, intrigeri wrote:
>>> I'd love to see a patch that clarifies this, since I'm sure you won't
>>> be the only one who's confused. And, given you just understood what it
>>> meant, you're probably the best placed person to improve this today :)
>>
>> something like this?
>>
>> https://gitlab.com/muri/tails.git
>> branch: doc/openpgp-signing-key
>> commit: 288911c3 rephrasing the openpgp signature key air-gapped
>> computer usage
>
> Thanks for the patch!
>
> I'll take care of reviewing this, amending, and merging. I also
> struggled with that sentence myself when working on the signing key
> transition statement. By that time I probably felt lazy to modify the
> rest of the doc but I'm glad you're tackling this now!
I've reviewed it and added a few minor improvements on top of it
(542e982..3e61933). Thanks to your work, I think that this section is
much better now!
Can you have a look at doc/openpgp-signing-key and tell me if it's fine
with you. Then I'll merge it.
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sajolida
