Although I can't install TAILS due to technical limitations on my end, I 
have followed the greeter development for the past few months and think 
that 'Start' isn't as clear of a label as we might need.  Start what? 
"the user session" though that isn't clearly communicated with a single 
word.  Also, 'Play', in regard to the icon, isn't the same as 'Start' or 
'Begin', though I am not sure that the computer icon is any more 
successful at communicating that we are entering the session. It also 
doesn't clearly communicate that we are "leaving the greeter".  Maybe a 
verbose "Begin Session", or something more accurate, just not too 
esoteric, is appropriate.  But that doesn't assure us that our 
preferences/settings have been saved. Maybe we can add this assurance 
somehow?
It appears there are three steps here. 1.Save 2.Close 3.Start Session - 
Can all of this be successfully communicated in a single action?  Maybe, 
though it seems to be quite tricky.  We might want a separation, and 
combination, of the actions.  We could have 'Settings' and 'Start 
Session' as the only two options on a particular screen, allowing clear 
directional distinction between the two [see attachment].  Forgive the 
misalignment with the rest of the greeter development in regard to 
typeface, spacing, sizing, context, and the like.
I would jump in on the "Persistence" issue, but I have yet to get that 
far.
Awesome,
SpencerOne
On 01/21/2015 16:10, KEN MCCALL wrote:
> HI Alan,
> 
> Inline below . . .
> 
> On Jan 21, 2015, at 03:38 PM, Alan <alan@???> wrote:
> 
>> Hi!
>> 
>> On Wed, 21 Jan 2015 16:39:19 +0000 (GMT)
>> KEN MCCALL <kemccall@???> wrote:
>> 
>>> Who is the target audience (persona)? An non-technical email user?
>>> A
>> 
>>> journalist with motivation? (Maybe this has been defined already,
>>> but
>> 
>>> I'm highly motivated and don't understand some things here).
>> 
>> This is roughtly defined in our design document
>> (https://tails.boum.org/contribute/design/#index5h3 [1]):
> 
> OK, good to know where this is. Thx!
> 
>> "The PELD's target user is the average user in terms of computer
>> literacy; he or she does not necessarily control fully the computer
>> being used. Examples would be a public computer in a library, coffee
>> shop, university or a residence. We assume that the target user does
>> not want to do any of the configurations (at least with respect to
>> security and anonymity) of the various applications and tools used
>> themselves, either because of insufficient knowledge, lack of
>> interest
>> or other reasons. The PELD MUST provide strong anonymity with no
>> need
>> of advanced configuration whatsoever. It MUST be made as difficult
>> as
>> possible for the user to unknowingly compromise anonymity."
> 
> Kind of what I figured. On a side note, the sentence " It MUST be made
> as difficult as
> possible for the user to unknowingly compromise anonymity." seems out
> of context for the section 2.1.5 Target user.
> 
>>> "Persistence" is a term that seems to be jargon (or perhaps
>>> specific
>> 
>>> to the Unix/Linux world?). It threw me for a loop and I'm a
>>> technical
>> 
>>> person. "Persistence" being an act versus describing an object (it
>>> is
>> 
>>> persistent). It's an encrypted area, or encrypted volume, secure
>>> area
>> 
>>> (or something more common), I'm uncertain thinking about it at
>>> this
>> 
>>> late hour, but another term is in need IMHO. Also, it's something
>> 
>>> that only exists on a thumb drive or some sort of USB storage,
>> 
>>> correct? This may affect the name or necessitate additional
>> 
>>> descriptions of some sort. Perhaps some mouse-over help may be in
>> 
>>> order? Just a thought.
>> 
>>> 
>> You're suggesting "Encrypted storage area"?
> 
> Yeah, I think "Encrypted storage area" meets the target use needs. Do
> you want or is it necessary to advise them first that they need a
> storage device installed?
> 
>>> The phrase "You don't have encrypted persistence, want to
>>> configure
>> 
>>> one?" This would change based upon the above. Perhaps, "Currently,
>> 
>>> there is no encrypted storage area. Do you want to make one? There
>> 
>>> are pros and cons." (Pros and cons hyperlinked to info.?)
>> 
>>> 
>> 
>>> The icon titled "unlock" should be titled "Unlock". A small UI
>> 
>>> consistency issue.
>> 
>>> 
>> 
>>> "Start" is starting what? Are we really starting something or
>> 
>>> accepting inputs? (Again, I may be way off base here).
>> 
>>> 
>> It is starting the user session (and leaving the greeter). Do you
>> have
>> a wording suggestion?
> 
> No. "Start" works fine. I just wasn't sure of what would be next.
> 
>>> Anyway, please take these for what you deem they're worth. I hope
>>> I
>> 
>>> can be more beneficial as I become more knowledgeable.
>> 
>>> 
>> Thanks for your input.
> 
> Welcome!
> 
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