Re: [Tails-dev] How the traffic confirmation attack on Tor a…

sycamoreone:
>> Tor has provided an updated version, we recommend you to upgrade to the
> s/Tor/the Tor Project

"The Tor Project" with a capital "T" of course.

>> > 1: Set up an administrative password[3]
>> > 2: Connect to the internet
>> > 3: Run the following in a "root terminal": apt-get update && apt-get
>> > install tor
>> >
>> > You know run the latest version of Tor which mitigates this vulnerability.
> s/know/now

I think it would be useful to add a small note that this is not
persistent even with a persistent volume enabled. Maybe add a link
to here
https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/persistence/configure/index.en.html#index8h2
and here
https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/persistence/configure/index.en.html#index13h2

Best,
sycamoreone