Re: [Tails-dev] Please review documentation improvements

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Autor: Matsa
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Temat: Re: [Tails-dev] Please review documentation improvements

Hi sajolida,

Le Tue, 15 Apr 2014 09:39:42 +0000,
sajolida@??? a écrit :

> Matsa:
> > please review the following commits, in matsa / master
>
> Thanks for all those tiny patches!
>
> > * b0d5a66 - add another link to "Tails does not start"
>
> - I rephrased it a bit.
> - Regarding terminology, note that we say "start" instead of "boot",
> and "hardware" instead of "material".
>
> > * 7a4b449 - add references to "Tails does not start"
>
> - I moved it before the virtualization section because I think it will
> be more useful.
> - Reformat the title to have "=" the same length as the title.
> - I reused the same formulation as
> on /support, /support/known_issues. I like copy paste :)
>
> > * 08636a1 - add l10n tricks
>
> - I reformat the "=" below the titles.


Thanks for fixing everything,
Cheers