Re: [Tails-dev] Please review doc update wrt. problematic US…

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Autor: intrigeri
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sajolida@??? wrote (16 Sep 2013 12:03:37 GMT) :
> If we believe the same error message is printed out when the
> "live-media=removable" trick needs to be used then we can described them
> at the beginning of a step 5:


> « if the error message is "xxx" then, try to remove the
> live-media=removable option. »


> That might add a bit of structure. But otherwise the current flow is
> fine with me.


Right, done (4d21697).

>> Doc writers, please review and suggest improvements if needed :)


> Great. I did some minor rephrasing.


Thanks!

> The caution warning is a very long
> sentence but I didn't find a good and quick solution to split it.


Neither could I.

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