Hi,
kolohe wrote (10 Apr 2013 17:51:41 GMT) :
> Everything removed in this reply was changed.
:)
>> - The Markdown of the bullet list in step 4 is still buggy. I'm sorry
>> I should have made it clear that the single quotes I wrote against
>> every bullet point was here only to delimit what I was suggesting,
>> but should not have been pasted as is.
> I removed the single quotes. Is it working properly now?
Yes.
>> - step 6 ("Reboot your Mac") seems awkward to me, as we just
>> redirected the user to the "start Tails" section on the download
>> page, so they're facing contradictory information at this point.
>> Perhaps the Mac-specific bits of step 6 should be integrated into
>> the download page's step 6 somehow?
>>
> I combined the Reboot your Mac and "start Tails" into the div
> class="next". Is that good?
Looks good to me.
Congrats!
I've merged your branch into the `doc/manual_usb_installation/mac' one
in our main Git repository, and pushed a few minor fixes on top of it.
sajolida, may you please have a look and merge if you're happy
with it?
(ticket: todo/document_USB_boot_for_Intel_Mac)
Cheers,
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