On 04/10/2013 05:58 AM, intrigeri wrote:
> Hi,
>
> kolohe wrote (06 Apr 2013 17:48:23 GMT) :
>> I've (hopefully) made all of the recommended changes. This should read
>> and look similar to the existing manual_usb_installation/linux.mdwn
>
>> https://github.com/kolohe/amnesia/blob/manual_usb_installation/mac/wiki/src/doc/first_steps/manual_usb_installation/mac.mdwn
>
>> Any reviews welcome!
>
> Here we go, then :)
>
Everything removed in this reply was changed.
> - The Markdown of the bullet list in step 4 is still buggy. I'm sorry
> I should have made it clear that the single quotes I wrote against
> every bullet point was here only to delimit what I was suggesting,
> but should not have been pasted as is.
I removed the single quotes. Is it working properly now?
> - step 6 ("Reboot your Mac") seems awkward to me, as we just
> redirected the user to the "start Tails" section on the download
> page, so they're facing contradictory information at this point.
> Perhaps the Mac-specific bits of step 6 should be integrated into
> the download page's step 6 somehow?
>
I combined the Reboot your Mac and "start Tails" into the div
class="next". Is that good?
> Cheers,
