intrigeri:
> Hi,
I fixed the screenshot of Tails greeter, see fa33418. And I confirm that
the display problem in my virtual machine is gone (the screen is 800x600
as before).
> sajolida wrote (11 Apr 2012 11:26:15 GMT) :
>> Ok, I changed all the "persistence storage" by "persistent volume"
>> and I'm not using the word "storage" anymore. If we agree on this
>> terminology then you might want to change the following
>> GUI accordingly.
>
>> I'm sending you a patch on tails-persistence-setup. Feel free to
>> apply whatever we find relevant.
>
> I applied this patch, but:
>
>> - gettext(q{A %s persistent storage area will be created on the <b>%s %s</b> device. Persistent data on this device will be stored in an encrypted form protected by a passphrase.}),
>> + gettext(q{A %s persistent volume will be created on the <b>%s %s</b> device as an encrypted partition protected by a passphrase.}),
>
> The original wording was taken directly from palimpsest, and I find it
> nicer. Also, I find it great to allow translators to steal the GNOME
> translations ;)
>
> I s/Persistent data/Data/, though.
I'm fine with that.
>> - I also changed "persistence filesystem", "persistent data" and
>> "persistent partition" to "persistence volume".
>> - I prefer to use "start" and "restart" than "boot" and "reboot", I
>> think it's less lingo and as precise. I'm also using "working session"
>> to explain the persistence between reboots. What do you think about this
>> last term?
>> - I changed "decide" to "specify", see the GDP Style Guide on that verb.
>
> Great.
>
>> The GUI is linking to the documentation on persistence in
>> doc/advanced_topics. That made me realize that I put it under
>> doc/first_steps but maybe that was not what was decide. I don't mind
>> moving it to doc/advanced_topics if we want to hide it a bit more
>> from beginners.
>
> I fixed the URL to match the current location of the docs.
>
> The result is in tails-persistence-setup 0.14. Pushed to devel.
Cool.
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sajolida
