Re: [Tails-dev] integrate walkthrough in doc-rework

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Hi,

alan@??? wrote (23 Jul 2011 21:49:34 GMT) :
>> From: sajolida <sajolida@???>
>> Date: Fri, 8 Jul 2011 06:11:17 -0700
>>
> I had a look to your changes. Here are some comments


> About commit 09d89fd: I think that it was nice that the beginning of the
> about page was a short summary of the goal of Tails:


>     Tails is a live CD or live USB that aims at preserving your privacy
>     and anonymity. It helps you to:


>     - use the Internet anonymously almost anywhere you go and on any computer:
>       all connections to the Internet are forced to go through the Tor network;
>     - leave no trace on the computer you're using unless you ask it explicitly.


>     [...]


> I'm not convinced that it is better with the new first paragraph:


>     Tails is a live system: a complete operating-system designed to be
>     used from a CD or a USB stick independently of the computer's
>     original operating system.

>
>     [...]


> I think that it is better to start to summary the goal of Tails in a few
> words that to explain what is a live system, which is already done lower
> in the page in the "Use anywhere but leave no trace" section.


Agreed (slightly, and I lack the big picture).

> So I suggest to reword this first paragraph to something like:


>     Tails is a live system that aims at preserving your privacy and
>     anonymity. It helps you to use the Internet anonymously almost
>     anywhere you go and on any computer but leave no trace.


I'm not comfortable with leaving "unless you ask it explicitly" aside.

Cheers,
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