Re: [Hackmeeting] Prix Ars Electronica / Digital Communities…

On 20090602@23:37, blicero wrote:
> ...
> Io e tibi abbiamo prodotto il testo qui sotto.
> Ve lo mando e domani integriamo ogni cosa che si dice e lo giriamo alla tipa di
> ars electronica.
> Il primo paragrafo ? l'intro biografica. Il secondo e' il testo piu' lungo.

propongo il diff:

- Hackmeeting offers workshop, conferences, spontaneous discussion,
+ Hackmeeting hosts workshops, conferences, fosters spontaneous discussion,

- Each proposed activity, though, is meant as one of the facet
+ Each proposed activity, though, is meant as a facet

- For the first time in 2009 Hackmeeting is going to be splitted in two parts, to reach as many people as possible: Warm up and Hackmeeting.
+ For the first time ever, this year Hackmeeting will be preceded by a Warm Up, to reach as many people as possible.

- Warm up is a series of events which will take place in various univerisities in Milan
+ Warm up is a series of events which will take place in various universities in Milan

- They will be open conferences presented by
+ These will be open conferences presented by

- fear embedded societies, security and control, open design e 3D animation
+ fear embedded and surveillance-bulimic societies, information security and social control issues, open design and 3D animation

> The Hackmeeting itself will take place in Sos Fornace, Rho (sosfornace.org) from june 19th to 21st: three days of workshops, lan space, sharing, meetings, discussions on free software, code, net neutrality, peer to peer and also digital countercultures, economies without capital, free speech against repression.
#qui e' un po' ridondante, ma non ho proposte migliori

- Three days of workshops, games, parties, debates, exchanges and most of all, collective learning.
+ Three days of workshops, games, parties, debates, exchange and most of all, non commercialized collective learning.

+ Code is written, future is not!