[Tails-l10n] [fr](review) Improve donation blog post

Autor: xin
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Para: Tails localization discussion
Temas novos: Re: [Tails-l10n] [fr](pull) Improve donation blog post
Asunto: [Tails-l10n] [fr](review) Improve donation blog post

Hello, few improvements proposed by Chre, please review.

Repo: https://git-tails.immerda.ch/xin/tails/
Branch: improvedonation
Last Commit: c5ccdc412db46f7f4d56649960f4c5b86e3ba958

Cheers.
xin

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