Re: [Tails-l10n] (review)[de] Upgrade error pages

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Hi,

spriver:
> another branch to review:
>
> https://gitlab.com/spriver/tails.git
> branch: de_upgrade_error
> HEAD commit: 4cf2819 Minor rephrasing
>
> Affected files:
> wiki/src/doc/upgrade/error.de.po
> wiki/src/doc/upgrade/error/check.de.po
> wiki/src/doc/upgrade/error/download.de.po
> wiki/src/doc/upgrade/error/install.de.po


Please review:

https://gitlab.com/flapflap/tails.git
branch: de_upgrade_error
HEAD commit: e90f9ee - some nitpicking and rephrasing

Summary of changes:
- "check for upgrades" translated as "nach Aktualisierungen suchen"
instead of "... prüfen"
- "Tor exit node" translated as "Tor Ausgangsrelais" (which we use
elsewhere in the documentation) instead of "Tor Exit-Node"
- Some rephrasing
- "Tails device" translated as "Speichermedium mit Tails" (which we
use elsewhere in the documentation, e.g. manual upgrade instructions)
instead of "Medium mit Tails"
- some nitpicking: "send us the error" translated as "uns einen
Fehlerbericht senden" instead of "uns einen Fehler senden" (I assume we
actually don't want to receive the errors themselves; we'd rather like
to receive error reports ;)
- "debugging information" translated as "Zusatzinformationen" instead
of "Fehlerbeseitigungsmeldungen", which sounded a bit weird to me :)

Cheers,
~flapflap