Hi,
I reviewed and made some minor changes. I am a bit unhappy with the
two "&" in line 121 and 129. In German "&" are afaik only allowed for
corporate names. I do not know how the situation in English is, maybe
it should be changed there also?
On 02/03/2015 22:34, Muri Nicanor wrote:
> On 02/03/2015 05:42 PM, flapflap wrote:
>> what about "Medium" or "Speichermedium"? I think we already use
>> it on other pages to refer to "device".
> oke, i changed it to speichermedium ;)
>
> https://gitorious.org/muri/tailstl.git branch
> de-doc-first_steps-persistence 6095e89 changed laufwerk zu
> speichermedium
>
> cheers, muri
Nevertheless, my changes are in:
https://github.com/spriver/tails
branch: de-doc-first_steps-persistence
commit: a5ba2ee Minor changes
Cheers,
spriver
